The Power of Curiosity
The urge to know everything lies within
Inside every human full of sin
Curiosity is exposed and demanded
So you are not the only one left clueless and stranded
That inner power later changes you
The demon inside fights until it can break through
The old you has disappeared and a new is made
The old you will never again be portrayed
You will never be the same
You are now the person you became
Forever and eternally ashamed
Forever and always inflamed
Life will never be the same
All because of the inner flame
All the anger built up that made you furious
All for just being curious
Is being curious worth it?
Always begging to know, when you shouldn’t give a s**t?
The power of curiosity kills everyone on the inside
It will always be seeked; never able to hide
I really liked the format and the way the story flowed. Curiosity is a very mysterious emotion we posses, good work and great job.
ReplyDeleteI really like that you tried something new by writing a poem. I thought that this was really good for your first try. I loved your overall idea of the power of curiosty. Your word choice was great and I actually liked how it rhymed. Maybe making this poem longer to add more affect could have made it even better:) nice job
ReplyDeleteNice job Swinna! I like the way the poem just flows on. It looks like you're finally starting to become a rapper like me. Good job
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done! And may I say you hit the mark with this one. Your voice is wonderful throughout and you really sum up the situation in the novella but also in a lot of things in life as well! Great Job!
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